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In The Dogged Footsteps~Chapter One

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In The Dogged Footsteps~Chapter One

Post by Ninja_Yoshi on Sat Sep 04, 2010 2:37 am

In The Dogged Footsteps
This is chapter one. Brace yourselves.


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Re: In The Dogged Footsteps~Chapter One

Post by Ninja_Yoshi on Sun Sep 19, 2010 1:45 am

This is a hard life. Take it from me. I'm the alpha. I know stuff like this.

This is the story of a pack of wild dogs. They've all been abandonded by their owners, and they've found each other. They live in the woods just off Vancouver, Washington. Noodles is a Rottweiler, and she's the alpha of the pack.
I'm allowing only one dog per member. (Sorry. It just gets confusing with more than one.) They may have a position in the pack, and once we get more members, we can have multiple dogs in one position. But, for now, one dog per position. Positions: Hunter, Tracker, Babysitter, Beta. (I'll eventually add more.)

FORM
Name: (one word)
Breed:
Age: (in dog years, please)
Looks:
Strength: (run fast, jump high, bite hard, etc.)
Extra:
Position:


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Post by Ninja_Yoshi on Sun Sep 19, 2010 4:49 am

Our pack is small. But we work.


Spoiler:
Name: Noodles
Breed: Rottweiler
Age: 21
Looks:
Strength: Hunting/tracking
Extra: Is a very skilled leader, handles problems well, and never sides with one dog on the situation. She always views it fairly.
Position: Alpha

Spoiler:
Name: Dark
Breed:German Shepard
Age: 16
Looks:
Strength: Run Fast
Extra: She is quite the athlete of the pack, but she is not one to give up on something. She can be nice, she just chooses when to do so. She is mostly a tough talker and always up for a fight, but when one of her companions is hurt, she is there to help them right away. She has known Noodles for a long time
Position: Beta


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Re: In The Dogged Footsteps~Chapter One

Post by Cheaka Higarashi on Sun Sep 19, 2010 7:08 am

FORM
Name: Dark
Breed:German Shepard
Age: 16
Looks:
Strength: Run Fast
Extra: She is quite the athlete of the pack, but she is not one to give up on something. She can be nice, she just chooses when to do so. She is mostly a tough talker and always up for a fight, but when one of her companions is hurt, she is there to help them right away. She has known Noodles for a long time.

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Re: In The Dogged Footsteps~Chapter One

Post by Ninja_Yoshi on Mon Sep 20, 2010 2:02 am

[Once you apply for a position, you're accepted!]

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Post by Cheaka Higarashi on Mon Sep 20, 2010 4:40 am

{sweet!!!!!!!!xD}

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Post by Ninja_Yoshi on Thu Sep 23, 2010 4:05 am

[Eh... Position?]

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Post by Cheaka Higarashi on Thu Sep 23, 2010 5:15 am

{Um........co-leader??}

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Post by Ninja_Yoshi on Thu Sep 23, 2010 5:46 am

[Beta. Okay, you're accepted!]

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Re: In The Dogged Footsteps~Chapter One

Post by Cheaka Higarashi on Thu Sep 23, 2010 5:53 am

{Sweet xD}

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Post by Ninja_Yoshi on Sun Oct 17, 2010 4:12 am

[You should SO start! *hides in cardboard box in a mysterious back alley*]

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Post by Cheaka Higarashi on Sun Oct 17, 2010 7:41 am

{fine, ok.}

Dark looked around, she was in the north part of the woods, closest to the lake. Winter lake was in, what the Nofurs called, the Oregon. They called the lake Crater Lake. She sniffed the air, there way a pack of Nofurs approaching. She had to leave, now. She turned her tail to the Nofurs and ran back to base camp. "Noodles!! The Nofurs are coming!! We must eat a little, then leave the north part of the woods! I don't think the Nofurs will stop coming. We must go back to the western woods. It is safer there than here." she panted. She was the fastest dog in the group.

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Post by Cheaka Higarashi on Mon Oct 18, 2010 1:55 am

{hey, can i make another character??}

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Post by Ninja_Yoshi on Thu Oct 28, 2010 5:21 am

[I'm only allowing one for right now.... sorry. Maybe later though.]

Noodles lifted her head from her paws. As soon as she heard Dark say the word "nofurs" she knew they had to haul butt, now.
"I knew we shouldn't have come down here!" Noodles spat at herself in frustration. "We have to go back up to Vancouver, Dark. There's more forest, and more room. Plus we have the rest of the pack to worry about. I have a feeling that once we get back we're going to have to sort out some problems. Where did we hide that goose we caught last night?" Noodles stood and shook the fallen leaves off of herself
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Post by Cheaka Higarashi on Sat Oct 30, 2010 2:31 am

{ok}

"Alright. I think you hide it right over," said Dark walking over to a pile of fresh snow, "here." she finished. She gently dug through the snow pile and pulled out a half eaten-goose. "Don't forget it was your idea to come down here to explore." she reminded Noodles. Dark hated coming to Oregon during the fall months. She didn't like the fact that Nofurs were coming up into the woods, with a be-be gun and shooting off their food supply or that their pups came towards them and pulled on her tail while they strayed from their parents. Then, a deafening sound, like a gun, went off. Dark looked of to her right and saw 3 little figures in the distance but the didn't have be-be guns; they had death shooters. "Man I hate those death shooters!" she thought. Dark looked at Noodles, "No time to eat, we have to leave. Now."

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Post by Ninja_Yoshi on Sun Oct 31, 2010 9:49 pm

"Just grab it by the neck and let's go." She shook herself once more, then took off to the north.

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Post by Cheaka Higarashi on Mon Nov 01, 2010 5:56 am

Dark nodded, grabbed the goose and ran for it. It only took her ten seconds to catch up to Noodles. Another death taker was sounded off, making Dark flinch. "Why are they still chasing us?! Don't they know that we're faster than them!!" she thought.

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Post by Ninja_Yoshi on Thu Nov 04, 2010 1:34 am

"Do they not understand that they're super slow?!" Noodles shouted. "I honestly can't understand why they won't quit. We're not a threat!"

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Post by Cheaka Higarashi on Fri Nov 05, 2010 1:40 am

"I know!! But, less talky and more runny!!!!" yelled Dark.

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Post by Ninja_Yoshi on Sun Nov 21, 2010 6:03 am

Noodles shut her mouth and ran harder.

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Post by Cheaka Higarashi on Sun Nov 21, 2010 7:02 am

Dark turned a corner but only to meet a Two-Leg with a death taker, "Crap."

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